Bleachbooru

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Everyone at her school thinks she works hard until late at night because she always seems sleepy, in reality her white master loves to use her young chink body all night long~!
She finds it annoying but quickly forgives him when she feels his BWC inside her little cunny <3

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    Known fact: once elves get a whiff of a white man, they will swarm and mate with him like wild animals~ He can either lay back and allow them to have their fun, making sure they know you love them, or you can show them their places~ Either way they know who the master is here~

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    evolutionary_8044 said:

    Known fact: once elves get a whiff of a white man, they will swarm and mate with him like wild animals~ He can either lay back and allow them to have their fun, making sure they know you love them, or you can show them their places~ Either way they know who the master is here~

    Nice

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    Still pending but I forgot to mention, if people end up liking this then I DO have an image that can be used in case I have any ideas or motivation to do a sequel! Criticism is also more than welcomed from those who have the patience to read this entire thing lmao

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    HyperBreederTwink said:

    Still pending but I forgot to mention, if people end up liking this then I DO have an image that can be used in case I have any ideas or motivation to do a sequel! Criticism is also more than welcomed from those who have the patience to read this entire thing lmao

    Would be nice to have the words larger, bit hard to see on mobile aye

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    Overall not bad, wouldn't mind seeing more.

    Main issue imo is less that there's too many words total, but rather too many words per image. Like, probably could've made it a 4-parter instead. Mostly because it ends up with me needing to zoom in, which is a slight negative for captions personally.

    As for the formatting, this isn't even remotely near the worst I've seen here. It's center-aligned, it's got decent margins, the text is all present and visible (albeit needing me to zoom in, at least).

    Overall, good work. imo could have split it into more parts, maybe used a different picture for each part, but that's mostly me nitpicking. Would definitely enjoy more.

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