Bleachbooru
Resized to 23% of original (view original)
octoling, marina, inkling, marie, and marina ida (nintendo and 2 more) drawn by greyimpaction

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    Testing this out, hopefully this works and does what I think it does?
    Part 1/2 of my caption! 2753 words in total and I proof read MOST of it!
    Unfortunately, PicsArt (which is where I used to make my captions) added a character limit since I last used it, and I didn't wanna deal with that, so I made this all in Ibis Paint X, so that's why it looks jank as fuck. I CAN'T stop taking L's, I'm gonna start crying if this keeps up!
    Anyways, hope it's good lmao
    [MxFF] [Part 1/2] [Splatoon] [2700+ Words] [Cock Shock] [Blowjob] [Deepthroat] [Established Relationship (Marina)]] [Cuckqueen] [Celebrities] [BBBWC (and balls)] [Whole Lotta Splooge] [I was craving sushi the whole time I was writing this]

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    HyperBreederTwink
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    Still pending but I forgot to mention, if people end up liking this then I DO have an image that can be used in case I have any ideas or motivation to do a sequel! Criticism is also more than welcomed from those who have the patience to read this entire thing lmao

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    • winterradio
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    HyperBreederTwink said:

    Still pending but I forgot to mention, if people end up liking this then I DO have an image that can be used in case I have any ideas or motivation to do a sequel! Criticism is also more than welcomed from those who have the patience to read this entire thing lmao

    Would be nice to have the words larger, bit hard to see on mobile aye

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    • VB 01
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    Overall not bad, wouldn't mind seeing more.

    Main issue imo is less that there's too many words total, but rather too many words per image. Like, probably could've made it a 4-parter instead. Mostly because it ends up with me needing to zoom in, which is a slight negative for captions personally.

    As for the formatting, this isn't even remotely near the worst I've seen here. It's center-aligned, it's got decent margins, the text is all present and visible (albeit needing me to zoom in, at least).

    Overall, good work. imo could have split it into more parts, maybe used a different picture for each part, but that's mostly me nitpicking. Would definitely enjoy more.

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