Thank you again

Dialogue could use some uh... work, and the premise is admittedly a little odd but who am I to complain. You did good work here as usual N!

Oh God... I remember I did like a whole caption series on both shows of this... Just got some weird and unwelcomed flashbacks to that shit.

DizzyYellow said:

Dialogue could use some uh... work, and the premise is admittedly a little odd but who am I to complain. You did good work here as usual N!

Usually when it's hypersexualized like this, the dialogue comes out cringey/mechanical, especially if you don't find the premise hot. I agree the dialogue is unnatural, but so is all dialogue in erotica. Just my thoughts. Glad you enjoyed!

I'm sure joseph is referring to that guy from that Jesus book, but it's incredibly funny to imagine Joseph joestar using the verbalase secret technique and running away from Charlie.